Suzanne Crawford
Directions: Imagine that you are an employer and have just received the letter below along with this person’s application. What would be your reactions to this letter? Why? If you were John’s friend and he had shown you this letter, what might you suggest to him as ways to improve it?
Deer Sir or Madam:
I red about the job your offering in the newspaper and want to apply for the position. I fell my experience is write four the position, and I think I wood make a good employee. I have been working a part-time job 4 the last to years. My boss has given me good evaluations and says I am a fine worker. I am a very hard worker and lick to due a good job.
I am going too school know and studing General Education classes. My grade point average is 3.0, witch is a B, and I have taken 26 units so far.
Pleas consider my resume and application. I hope to here from you soon.
Thank U.
Sincerely,
John Hopeful