Using Specifics

Below is a we-organized paragraph but one that is very vague and general. What I want you to do is to make it sing with concrete, specific detail that conveys a single, dominant impression. The vague words appear like this: underlined and in Italics. You're encouraged to rewrite each sentence and to add more, if you deem it necessary. Have fun.

I work in a restaurant in my neighborhood. I'm going to quit because I don't like this job. The first reason why I don't like it is because I get paid so little. Also, the benefits are terrible. Secondly, the restaurant is really ugly. I want to work in a cool place. Finally, my boss is very demanding. He asks me to do a lot of work. For these reasons, I plan to quit soon.